You have the start of a very good character here, although it's funny that you say that the body "is cylinders." It's not. The cylinders give you a general idea of the character's shape and where certain things should be. They shouldn't be the final shape of her, otherwise you'll have a character made of wooden blocks and it's evident in a lot of these poses. There are no perfectly straight lines in or on the human body. There's curved and less curved. Use the cylinders as a guideline at first, if it helps, but don't let them influence how she moves.
You have the start of a very good character here, although it's funny that you say that the body "is cylinders." It's not. The cylinders give you a general idea of the character's shape and where certain things should be. They shouldn't be the final shape of her, otherwise you'll have a character made of wooden blocks and it's evident in a lot of these poses. There are no perfectly straight lines in or on the human body. There's curved and less curved. Use the cylinders as a guideline at first, if it helps, but don't let them influence how she moves.
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